I always liked the way John tries to salvage his date with Sara even before they're untied and on their way. It says a lot, I think, that John did not consider that horrible date to be enough of a disaster to turn Sara off, and I admired Sara's pluckiness in having enough of a insight into John that she is still drawn to him, despite her caution. You captured her generous nature so very well here. Lovely. Ru
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Date: 2014-03-03 02:56 am (UTC)Ru