This is...interesting. Strange, but interesting, and also unlike anything I've ever read before, so I'm not sure how I'm supposed to think about it or what I want to say about it. I feel like I've just watched one of those super-vague art films where stuff happens, and then more stuff happens, and the conclusion doesn't really tie things together and end the film so much as knot the end and let the remaining bit of string fray madly and confuse the heck out of the viewer. Er, something like that. But whatever. Anyways, I'd say this story was 'good' if I had any sort of scale to compare it on, so at the risk of sounding repetitive, I'll just say it's really interesting and leave it there.